1. The graph illustrates the changes in the average spendings [k3] average expenditure in million pounds on children's sport and kids' participation on three various sports [k3] children’s participation in three different sports from 2008 till 2014 [k3] from 2008 to 2014. / The graph depicts trends in spending on children's sports and their participation rates in three different disciplines between 2008 and 2014.

2. The main trend emerges in gradually ascent of spending [k3] is a gradual increase in financial outlay on children's sport and football's excellence [k3] football’s dominance in participation. / A key trend is the steady rise in funds directed toward children's sports and the sustained popularity of football.

3. Overall, in 2008 the expenditure on children's sport was equal to [k3] stood at 20 million pounds, while their involvement in football constituted [k3] was/reached 8 million. / In 2008, spending on children's sports stood at 20 million pounds, while football participation reached 8 million.

4. It is also clearly [k4] clear that swimming and athletics made up 2 and 1 millions respondents respectively [k4] accounted for 2 and 1 million participants, respectively. / Additionally, 2 million children participated in swimming, while 1 million took part in athletics.

5. Throughout 2008 to 2010 [k4] from 2008 to 2010, the cost on children's engagement [k3] expenditure on children's sports was slightly improving [k4] slightly increased, accounted for [k4] reaching approximately 23 million pounds. / Between 2008 and 2010, spending on children's sports experienced a slight rise, reaching around 23 million pounds.

6. At the same time, the trajectory of football gently declined [k3] experienced a slight decrease to under 8 million children, while swimming kept growing up bit by bit [k3] continued to increase gradually to 4 million participants; and athletics remained the same [k3] remained unchanged. / Meanwhile, football participation saw a slight decline, dropping below 8 million, whereas swimming participation gradually climbed to 4 million, and athletics remained stable.

7. After that year, average spendings became to raise [k4] began to rise more noticeably, already making up about [k3] reaching about 33 million pounds in 2014. / Following 2010, expenditure on children's sports began to rise significantly, reaching around 33 million pounds by 2014.

8. Interestingly, [k2: logic—avoid subjective commentary in Task 1] the kinds of sport also commenced to improve [k3] sports also saw an upward trend. / Participation in all three sports exhibited a positive trend.

9. Football was rising considerably, ultimately, accounted for [k4] rose considerably, ultimately accounting for 9 million engaged participants. / Football participation increased significantly, eventually reaching 9 million.

10. The trajectory of swimming went up as well, made up 3 million [k4] also increased, reaching 3 million participants and speeded up its motion [k3] accelerated in 2012.

Essay. Are gyms really that important for a healthy living?  Outline the main stereotypes people have about fitness and ways to make it free and even more enjoyable.

1. The impact of gyms on healthy lifestyle [k4: missing article] a healthy lifestyle has been a subject of extensive debates [k4: wrong noun form—use singular] extensive debate. This essay examines the stereotypes surrounding fitness and considers ways to make it at no cost [k3: awkward phrasing] free of charge. / This essay explores the common stereotypes about fitness and discusses how to make exercising both free and enjoyable.

2. To address the questions, firstly,  it is important to consider the significance of gym [k4: missing article] the gym. In contemporary society, the gym has evolved into a powerful symbol of health and fitness, often regarded as an essential component of a healthy lifestyle and its sore pathway [k3: unclear phrase] a core pathway, but people can work out without one. The main essence is that you do any activities by special equipment [k3: awkward and unclear phrasing] engage in activities using specialized equipment to enhance your build, achieve physical goals, and improve mental condition. The catch, however, is that people can do the same activities outdoors, for example, in their homes [k3: incorrect example] or even at home. / Although gyms are seen as essential to a healthy lifestyle due to their specialized equipment and services, people can achieve similar results outdoors or at home.

3. A prevalent stereotype surrounding gyms is that they are primarily for "fit" individuals, who [k3: redundant comma] "fit" individuals who already possess an ideal body. This perception could make newcomers shy away or join out [k4: incorrect phrasing"] could deter newcomers from joining because of judgment. Furthermore, many individuals associate gym [k4: missing article] the gym with a superficial focus on appearance, leading to the stereotype that fitness is primarily about aesthetics. / Gyms are often perceived as places reserved for "fit" individuals, which can deter newcomers who fear judgment. Additionally, gyms are frequently associated with superficial goals like aesthetics rather than holistic health.

4. Turning to the third question [k2: unclear reference—there are no three questions], it becomes clear that if you want to have fun exercising, you should gather with your friends or like-minded people, so your working-out becomes social event [k3: awkward phrasing] so that your workouts become a social event that also can [k4: awkward word order] can also enhance motivation and enjoyment. You also have the ability to do fitness without any payment. [k3: unnatural phrasing] You can exercise for free. For instance, you might exercise outdoors, where special sport-areas are located [k3: "Might" sounds tentative and less confident; in an academic essay, it's better to use "can" for assertiveness. Additionally, "special sport-areas" is unnatural] can exercise outdoors, where outdoor fitness zones are often available. Moreover, for one of variants [k4: awkward phrase] another option, you can pick your own house, in which there are a lot space of course [k4: incorrect grammar—use "which often has plenty of space"] which often has plenty of space. / To make exercise more enjoyable, people can gather with friends or like-minded individuals, turning workouts into social events that boost motivation. Free alternatives include outdoor fitness zones or exercising at home, where there is often plenty of space.

5. Ultimately, while gyms are not so necessary and relevance, [k3- 'relevance is a noun and doesn't fit in here] relevant /In summary, while gyms are not as important as they may seem, it is also crusial [k5: spelling error] crucial to recognize that there are a lot of [k1: style too informal—use "many"] still many stereotypes about fitness and other, costless ways to keep in shape. / As long as gyms are not as important as they may seem, it is crucial to address common stereotypes about fitness and explore cost-free ways to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Speaking 2. How I would develop my brand of clothes

1. The image I would want my line of clothes have [k4] to have is definitely a casual one, because I'm a stickler [k1: too formal and rigid. "Stickler" often implies strictness or excessive adherence to rules, which might sound too strong or unnatural in casual speech.]  of [k4] for / I am into this style myself and know a lot of [k1] many of its advantages. / The image I would want for my clothing line is definitely a casual one, as I am a strong advocate /fan of this style and fully appreciate its advantages.

2. This mode [k3] style is a blend of commonness [k3] practicality and stability: the main merit of my products would be independence of trends [k3] being timeless, cheapness [k3] affordability, and great ability to combine with each other / and ease of mix-and-match.

3. There a lot of [k1] are many advertisement channels, but I would prefer social networks with one zest [k3] one key tactic: endeavors toward going step by step with youths by humor and use engaging stories and eye-catching visuals [k3] efforts to engage young audiences through humor, compelling storytelling, and visually striking content that reflect the brand's ethos. / There are many advertising channels, but I prefer social networks because they allow brands to connect with young audiences through humor, compelling storytelling, and engaging visuals that reflect the brand's identity.

4. This judgement is based on my life experience, since I have already seen an example of great promotion with the help of TikTok or Instagram, and hope I would attain the very success [k4] can achieve similar success. / My belief is based on personal experience, as I have witnessed highly effective promotions on TikTok and Instagram, and I aspire to achieve similar success.

5. The most interesting step is setiing [k5] setting a price. Most likely, I would [k1] I will conduct a thorough cost analysis to determine a perfect price [k3] an optimal price that ensures desired profit and remain [k4] the desired profit while remaining accessible to the target audience. This includes calculating the cost of materials, production, and marketing. / The most exciting step is setting a price. I will likely conduct a thorough cost analysis to determine an optimal price that guarantees profitability while staying accessible to my target audience.